Saturday, April 23, 2011

Hotel sex (2)

part 1 here 

I grinned and told you the window was a great idea. I tried to get off of you to make our way to the window, but you still held me close to you. You whispered in my ear how you wanted me to stand, and then to wait for you without moving. Then you released me and told me to go.

I opened the drapes, looking outside the 4th floor window to the parking lot. I placed my hands, outstretched and as far as they could go, on the cold glass. Then I pressed my chest against it, gasping as it met my breasts. I pressed my legs together, my rear end away from the glass and presented to you. Lastly, I turned my head to the back of the room, away from you, my cheek against the window. As instructed.

And waited.

I heard some noises I couldn't quite figure out.

And waited some more.

My cum-filled pussy was leaking down my thighs... I could feel it, as it was throbbing anew.

Your hand landed on my ass so fucking hard that I let out a scream and pushed away from the glass, protesting. "That's for thinking that I'm too sweet", your voice echoed in my ear. I felt the sting so intensely that my face was burning and my eyes watered. But I was loving this, no mistaking that...

Your hand re-grabbed a fistful of hair and pressed me back against the window. I knew you weren't done and I was biting my lower lip to somehow find strength for the next one, which came on the other ass cheek. "and that's for not keeping position the way I asked you to."

I didn't know if people were watching, but if they were, I wondered if they were as excited as me.

As if I was the most precious thing, your hand caressed me... soothing the flames, alleviating the pain. Your hand went between my legs and I heard you sigh as you stroked me. You let go of my hair and I heard something behind me. I knew better than to move by now.

Then you slipped your belt around my neck.

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Note:

This must have been the most erotic dream I've had since I can't remember when... Unfortunately, I woke up just after that. So let's get interactive with it! Let's see how you would end it. Rules are: 
  • No more than 500 words.
  • Entries to be sent via email (not in my comments' box!), signed with a pen name of your choice so I can give you proper credit (if you have a blog and wish to link to it, please include it as well).
  • I'll give you until May 8, 5 pm EDT to submit your ending.
I will include all endings on a separate page within the complete fantasy (that will be found to the right side), but I will post/publish independently the one I like the most.

9 comments:

  1. a wonderful challenge....and a great beginning

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  2. Wow! That's quite a dream.

    I'm sure I'll be able to come up with something.... :-)

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  3. Oh my... So delectable... *sigh*

    (And what a disappointment you woke at that point. Here's hoping you receive the next installment as you sleep very soon.)

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  4. that story made me so friggin horny i had to go watch some porn to and finish it in my head! and take care of myself obviously

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  5. unfortunately, i can't write stories yet. hopefully some day i can.

    nice to know (and read) someone from my side of the world.

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  6. Very good France . . . That last line really got our attention . . . :) Ciao

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  7. Oh my, this is going to be fun!! ^_^

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  8. Wow, I almost always wake up at the worst times, just like your dream ended and left us wanting sooo much more. I'm looking forward to reading everyone's ideas on the ending here...

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  9. Don't you hate that... I wish I could write stories, but.. I'll love to read the winner....

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